Lollipop climbed her favourite tree, not noticing that the tree was very old. When she got to the top branch, it started to wiggle.
Luckily, Lilly saw the branch wiggling with Lollipop on it.
At that moment, the branch fell with Lollipop on it. Lilly caught Lollipop and said, "Now you have learnt a lesson."Well done, Emily. You can add a few things to help the readers understand the story better. Tell us about Lilly in the orientation. Explain why Lollipop wanted to climb the tree. Describe the tree.
